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February 8, 2021
Good afternoon, Richard. Here is a between-the-lines title for you – A Story of Personal Redemption. – Ms. Havisham
1717. This is unexpected. I cannot imagine how such a story can be converted.
You have forgiven yourself for what you can never know. You are freed from knowing and practicing faith in G-D. Let the story stand on this assumption within your personal inner reality. Imagine the word "redemption" being invisible between each and every line. You had a marsupial dream with your eyes open for thirty-three years, and you have the notes and drafts to prove it. – Ms. H.
2218. Will you be the Narrator like the Stage Manager in "Our Town"?
We can start with what you have already deleted in forty-six chapters. We can have a Dream Manager. We also need a dream format to lessen the metaphysics into the background science of dream manipulation. Ms. H.
2226. I like the concept – an old concept of Id, Ego, and Superego themed unconscious levels.
This is worth continuing. A change of setting will do us good. Post. – Ms. H.
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